Thursday, March 11, 2010

Opinion Essay

DO YOU THINK THE MARRİAGE SOMEONE FROM OTHER COUNTRY IS RIGHT?

Whatever you agree or not, the marriage with person living in abroad has changed our lifes in negative ways.A lot of people were married to them, but the relationships were affected them badly.Because of this, marrying someone from other country causes the negative things.What are they?.

Firstly;the most important aspect is the differencies between them.Our life styles can not fix theirs.That's why ,there a lot of problems , disagreements.For example;We,Turks, kiss each other but this behaviour can be misunderstood by foreign people.It is wrong thing according to them.If you like that, when you kissed man older than you as respect, you are blamed for this.Because it is pity.The second one, both of you speak different languages.As long as you live together, you will have problems because of language differencies.Neither you nor she/he will learn the yours languages sufficiently.You can not say what you'll say as you want , so does he.Even all things , some people say that marrying someone from other country may improve our lifes , world and can be beneficial for us.However, if you thing from all side mentally, they will say 'NO, I can't live him'.But they can not see diaadvantages.Because of these thoughts , a lot of people marry but they are divorces in a short time.And so the divorcing is becoming more and more , nowadays.

As I have said in the body paragraph , marrying someone from other country affects us badly.May be,there are few people living hppily with her /his spouse.But this is an exception.Don't forget thinking this point from the large view.If you think mentally, you'll find the right way..

3 comments:

  1. Headline is good.It is attractive and you succesfully explained your idea why it is not a good idea apart from some grammatical errors ı like it.

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  2. hi selda.. firstly your topic is general but you tried to write the best. your essay has some punctuation mistakes for example (pesrson,whetever..)

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  3. hi selda;

    your i liked your essay very much. you have lots of interesting ideas about the topic. there are some grammatical mistakes but while reading the essay i found mistakes difficultly. nice work... :)

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