Thursday, March 11, 2010

Comparision and Contrast Essay

MY TWO ROOMS

Even though it isn't like my own bedroom, I have to admit that it is being my second room.Sometimes, I miss my bed.Sleeping seems difficult at first but in a short time I am accustomed to live there.When you compare them both , you will see their differncies , but they have things in common and I love both of them.

Both places have self-beayty and distinctive.For example; in the two rooms there are a two-floored bed.And I sleep the upfloor bed as I do at my own bedroom.Secondly, As the wardrop is necessary in a bedroom , I have the wardrop at my two rooms.In another thingin common, to be able to study the lesson there are a table in all rooms at KYK.Ans alsoboth of them have blotters.

Despite of their similiraties, these rooms are more differencies than tha similiraties.Sleep in my room is more refleshing and more comforting.Because that is only mine.And whenever I want to sleep , I can slleep in it quietly.Because there is no noise, no person ,That's why there is happiness.But in dormitory,As we are six people including me , Acann't sleep whenever I want.And that is very disturbing.The second differenty is that we cann't open the curtain all time in contrat I can open it in my own room.Because we are at the first floor in the dormitory.If we open them every person can see our room easily.The another one is that my wardrop in dormitory is so tight that I cann't put my clothes into it unwrinklabely.I hate this situation.But my on wardrop is not like that.I can put my all clothes into it easily.In other differency is my room is dirtier tham my dormitory.I have to clean my bed and tidy it.Because I don't live there only me.

In conclusion,these are two room I love.For me, both of them are home.When I want to go my home I miss the dormitory but when I come to the dormitory I miss my home :( So they both are indispensible for me any more...

1 comment:

  1. I do not like your topic sentence.It does not attractive.It can be changed.But your thesis statement is good.you succesfully explain you topic and also succesfully compare and contrast these two rooms.Generally it is good

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