REASONS OF CRIMES
Nowadays, we see so many crimes and criminals that it is impossible to get frightened and shocked.There are many people who commit suicides, man-slaughter, kill someone around us .But certainly they have problems causing the crimes
Firstly , one of what causing people to commit suicids or make harmful events is mental problems.While some people kill someone by accident , the others kill them deliberately.People , commiting suicides, kiiling ones don't know if the bahaviours they will make are right or not.If they are not stopped b y the professional ones or doctors,they can give the others harm.This can affect both them and the innocent ones.the other reason may be revenge.Some people want to take their revenges.So, they can kill the other people even the person kills one by accident without knowing if it is his/her real aim.He can kill him by not thinking its consequences as his heart has had an ache because of killing.Eveb he knows his behaviours are not right he can do that to onlt take his revenge.Has he right to do that because of this reason
The numbre of criminals and crimes is getting more and more because of the problems like these ones.In my opinion,these bad eggs must be taken under the control . Let both everyone and world be happy! Otherwise most people will take harm ..
ı think ,intruction is good , but I can't understand which opinion you support.
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