THE PERSON I SHARE MY LİFE
Who won't have a special husband ? Now , I am thinking this question's answer , but I couldn't find anyone who will say 'I don't want.'In my opinion , it may have been everyone's dreams since they were little.Both women and men want to have special and perfect couples.Are you wondering how the perfect husband shoulD be ? That's like that :
Firstly ; I want a husband who shoulD be romantic.I should take the unexpected gifts at the unexpected times.He should always make me surprized.I want a husband who should have plans for only me to be alone with me.I want a husband who will buy and bring the flowers I love such as orchids and daisies.He should make me feel important and special.Additionaly , I want a husband who shouldn't forget the special days such as our anniversal and my birtday ... etc. He should celebrate these days in undreamable and unforgettable way.He should make me love him more and more.
Secondly ; I want a husband who will respect me about everything .He should listen whatever I say carefully.Our life is our life.We both decide all things together ; however , he should respect me every decisions I have decided like I respect his decisions.For example ; If I want to make a career , he should understand me , not say nothing and confirm me.If I come to home late , he should make cook , wash the dishes and look after the children.
As the third one ; I want a husband who will be loyal to me .According to him , I should be the most beautiful woman in the world . He shouldn't be interested in other women around him at both his school and business.No women shouldn't be succesful in affecting him.I want a husband who makes me feel that he love me so much.He shouldn't look at no women but only me.
As another feature ; I want a husband who won't be mean and also will love travelling.He should be adventurous.He should always take me away the places we don't know.I want a husband who loves watching the horror films , because I love them,so much.I want a husband who knows his responsibilities such as cleaning , looking after the children , washing the dishes .. etc whenever I am late to home and don't feel myself good.
My husband should be like those features.As I said above , he should have the shapes I want from him.Who won't want a special husband like that ?
Sunday, December 12, 2010
Monday, November 8, 2010
NARRATIVE ESSAY
POINT OF MY LIFE
At the age of twelve, I experienced the worst earthquake one
in my life in İstanbul.Never had I thought that I would see such a notorious catastrophe one day.I had never been in such a big disaster that effected the people so deeply.It was as if your life got darker and darker. Furthermore ,the earthquake taught me that life is unpredictable and life should be cherished intensely.
It was an ordinary day and woke up early to meet with Tayfun.I dressed up
and prepared to go out.While I was on bus the weather started to get dark.I was feeling
the storm was comıng by lookıng at the sky.AS Soon as I arrıved the cafe and sat on the chaır wıth Tayfun.I felt that the floor was shakıng slowly.We thougt that it was only a tremor that would soon end.
Before I had felt many tremors but that one was different fear in my life.The tremors so strong that we felt the ground yawned.We could not move anywhere an the escape was impossible in our condition.The people got shocked in the cafe….It was chaos. Everybody was trying to escape and either us.I stopped and thought a second “Is this really end of my lİfe?”
Fortunately , Tayfun caught me and we got outjust at that time the cafe was destroyed.It was a miracle because we were still alive.I could not belıeve my eyes when I saw the destoyed building .All of the city was razed and many peope died.It was the most strongest earthquake ın my lıfe that I have never forgotten.When I remember this event I can not stop crying.Being together with our loved ones and stil being alive are the most pleasure in my life…
İLKAY AYILMAZ DÖNDÜ AVCI
TAFUN ATMAZ SELDA BACAK
At the age of twelve, I experienced the worst earthquake one
in my life in İstanbul.Never had I thought that I would see such a notorious catastrophe one day.I had never been in such a big disaster that effected the people so deeply.It was as if your life got darker and darker. Furthermore ,the earthquake taught me that life is unpredictable and life should be cherished intensely.
It was an ordinary day and woke up early to meet with Tayfun.I dressed up
and prepared to go out.While I was on bus the weather started to get dark.I was feeling
the storm was comıng by lookıng at the sky.AS Soon as I arrıved the cafe and sat on the chaır wıth Tayfun.I felt that the floor was shakıng slowly.We thougt that it was only a tremor that would soon end.
Before I had felt many tremors but that one was different fear in my life.The tremors so strong that we felt the ground yawned.We could not move anywhere an the escape was impossible in our condition.The people got shocked in the cafe….It was chaos. Everybody was trying to escape and either us.I stopped and thought a second “Is this really end of my lİfe?”
Fortunately , Tayfun caught me and we got outjust at that time the cafe was destroyed.It was a miracle because we were still alive.I could not belıeve my eyes when I saw the destoyed building .All of the city was razed and many peope died.It was the most strongest earthquake ın my lıfe that I have never forgotten.When I remember this event I can not stop crying.Being together with our loved ones and stil being alive are the most pleasure in my life…
İLKAY AYILMAZ DÖNDÜ AVCI
TAFUN ATMAZ SELDA BACAK
Sunday, October 31, 2010
OPINION ESSAY
DO YOU THINK THAT ALTERNATIVE MEDICINE IS GOOD EFFECTS ON THE PEOPLE?
Whether you agree or not, I believe that alternative medicine gives harmful effects to people who are using. A lot of people saw non-conventional medicine as miracle. They always believed strongly if they use this medicine, they will protect from illness themselves without thinking its side-effects. However; taking doctors’ advise or going to the doctors’ is beter and healtier than using alternative medicine.
Nowadays, if people catch a cold or another illnesses, there are a lot of ways to keep them from getting worse or cleaning them up all together without any kind of medication. They are called ‘ koca-karı ilacı’ in Türkish such as drinking mint-lemon tea if you’re cold or putting beaten bread on the bruised / being hurt place. They are beneficial sometimes, because they are so easily coming over when it is compared with cancer or tumor… etc. A lot of study don’t support this medicine and the people using it. A Norwegion Multicentre Study examined the association between the use of alternative medicine and cancer survival. 515 patients using Standard medical care for cancer were followed for 8 years.22% of these patients used alternative medicine concurrently with their Standard care. The study revealed that death rates were 30% higher in alternative medicine users than in those who didn’t use alternative medicine.
As I said both introductıion and body paragraph, alternative medicine has negative effects on the people using it. If you want to have longer and healtier life, you must give up using alternative medicine and start to prefer to conventional medicine.
Selda BACAK
09131016
Whether you agree or not, I believe that alternative medicine gives harmful effects to people who are using. A lot of people saw non-conventional medicine as miracle. They always believed strongly if they use this medicine, they will protect from illness themselves without thinking its side-effects. However; taking doctors’ advise or going to the doctors’ is beter and healtier than using alternative medicine.
Nowadays, if people catch a cold or another illnesses, there are a lot of ways to keep them from getting worse or cleaning them up all together without any kind of medication. They are called ‘ koca-karı ilacı’ in Türkish such as drinking mint-lemon tea if you’re cold or putting beaten bread on the bruised / being hurt place. They are beneficial sometimes, because they are so easily coming over when it is compared with cancer or tumor… etc. A lot of study don’t support this medicine and the people using it. A Norwegion Multicentre Study examined the association between the use of alternative medicine and cancer survival. 515 patients using Standard medical care for cancer were followed for 8 years.22% of these patients used alternative medicine concurrently with their Standard care. The study revealed that death rates were 30% higher in alternative medicine users than in those who didn’t use alternative medicine.
As I said both introductıion and body paragraph, alternative medicine has negative effects on the people using it. If you want to have longer and healtier life, you must give up using alternative medicine and start to prefer to conventional medicine.
Selda BACAK
09131016
Friday, October 22, 2010
MY THOUGHTS ABOUT 2 FILMS
When I compare two films, I want to say I liked Miracle Worker more than Angela's Ashes .I do not know why, but I get impressed from it.Angela'a Ashes is one of the most impressive films.As I knew its content, I liked another film.Miracle Worker is ,in fact, a perseverance girl.If I were her teacher,I thougt that I would not put up with her.She was so saasy girl.However, I thougt Keller,her behaving type was so normal because as you knew , she was both deaf and blind.Angela'a Ashes was so effective film , too.They tried to live in that poorness and difficultness.As consequences of them, the children started to die or starve.:(.Shortly, both of films are so effective, succesfull and well-done.
Friday, May 21, 2010
DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY
A VISIT TO A ZOO
The rain had been failing continuously for the last three or four days. We had been virtually imprisoned in our rooms. Some of my friends and I decided to enjoy this Sunday thoroughly. We started 10 A.M and reached the Edward Memorial Zoological Garden, Lucknow,at 11 A.M. As we entered the gate, we noticed two [airs of monkeys of a special type. Standing near the boundary, some small children were giving them bananas. These monkeys, know as Gorillas, walked like man to take them. There chattering was also, more or less, similar to the voice of man. They could imitate the various actions of man. One of them walked with a stick in his hand. They interested us very much. In fact, gorillas and chimpanzees are the nearest relations of man in hierarchy of evolution.
Just a few steps ahead, on the left hand, we saw the bird's section. They were kept in very large enclosures surrounded by wire gauze. Inside the enclosures, there were trees, a small tank, a few water-pots etc. There were birds of numerous types. They attracted us very much. Their multicolored winds and different notes were very charming. Some ducks and cranes were swimming in the tank. Cranes looked very beautiful. We also saw two ostriches. They were white with beautiful red, long necks. The neck could be thrown out to a long distance like a spring. We liked them very much.
Then we turned towards the right hand. There were large enclosures with very strong and big iron gates. Though the iron bars of the gates we could see a pair of big lions. They very sight of them was frightening. Few small cubs were also playing inside it. But the condition of the lions was quite pitiable. It was other chambers, close to this chamber, there were panthers and tigers. They also did not appear to be quite comfortable inside their enclosures.
To the right of these enclosures, we observed a large trench. In some parts of if there was water. Tress were also growing in it. At first sight, it appeared to be a neglected area. But when we came near it and observed more keenly, we found at some distance a big Rhinoceros walking freely in it. We were told by a guide that its skin in very tough. A bullet could not pierce it. It would be rebounded. It was used for making shields. We were all surprised to learn this. Indeed, it was a frightful animal which we have never seen before.
One thing which we observed there, was the feeding arrangement for the different animals. The zoo authorities gave the most suitable diet to the different animals. Lions and other meat -eaters were given meat. Birds were given food grains which they liked. Those animals which liked to eat grass and green leaved, were left in grassy field. Thus they were kept in the most natural way. Still some of the animals who are great freedom lovers did not like artificial arrangement which were provided for them.
After spending about four hours in the Zoo, we decided to return. I felt that a great a addition has been made to my knowledge. Thus Zoo is a place of education as well s of entertainment. It may be suggested in the end that the animals kept in a Zoo must be treated sympathetically. Big animals, like the lions, leopards, etc, should be given their fill of food. They should not be kept hungry.
BY SAMPLE ESSAY
The rain had been failing continuously for the last three or four days. We had been virtually imprisoned in our rooms. Some of my friends and I decided to enjoy this Sunday thoroughly. We started 10 A.M and reached the Edward Memorial Zoological Garden, Lucknow,at 11 A.M. As we entered the gate, we noticed two [airs of monkeys of a special type. Standing near the boundary, some small children were giving them bananas. These monkeys, know as Gorillas, walked like man to take them. There chattering was also, more or less, similar to the voice of man. They could imitate the various actions of man. One of them walked with a stick in his hand. They interested us very much. In fact, gorillas and chimpanzees are the nearest relations of man in hierarchy of evolution.
Just a few steps ahead, on the left hand, we saw the bird's section. They were kept in very large enclosures surrounded by wire gauze. Inside the enclosures, there were trees, a small tank, a few water-pots etc. There were birds of numerous types. They attracted us very much. Their multicolored winds and different notes were very charming. Some ducks and cranes were swimming in the tank. Cranes looked very beautiful. We also saw two ostriches. They were white with beautiful red, long necks. The neck could be thrown out to a long distance like a spring. We liked them very much.
Then we turned towards the right hand. There were large enclosures with very strong and big iron gates. Though the iron bars of the gates we could see a pair of big lions. They very sight of them was frightening. Few small cubs were also playing inside it. But the condition of the lions was quite pitiable. It was other chambers, close to this chamber, there were panthers and tigers. They also did not appear to be quite comfortable inside their enclosures.
To the right of these enclosures, we observed a large trench. In some parts of if there was water. Tress were also growing in it. At first sight, it appeared to be a neglected area. But when we came near it and observed more keenly, we found at some distance a big Rhinoceros walking freely in it. We were told by a guide that its skin in very tough. A bullet could not pierce it. It would be rebounded. It was used for making shields. We were all surprised to learn this. Indeed, it was a frightful animal which we have never seen before.
One thing which we observed there, was the feeding arrangement for the different animals. The zoo authorities gave the most suitable diet to the different animals. Lions and other meat -eaters were given meat. Birds were given food grains which they liked. Those animals which liked to eat grass and green leaved, were left in grassy field. Thus they were kept in the most natural way. Still some of the animals who are great freedom lovers did not like artificial arrangement which were provided for them.
After spending about four hours in the Zoo, we decided to return. I felt that a great a addition has been made to my knowledge. Thus Zoo is a place of education as well s of entertainment. It may be suggested in the end that the animals kept in a Zoo must be treated sympathetically. Big animals, like the lions, leopards, etc, should be given their fill of food. They should not be kept hungry.
BY SAMPLE ESSAY
DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY
Summer at the Cabin
The cabin was built in the 1950's when my Great Grandpa rode up there, and it looks like not many repairs have been made since that time. The cabin is about 15 feet by 20 feet, and is made out of pine logs. There are places where you can see between the logs because the chinking is falling out. The cabin faces to the east. It has a small porch that was made by leaving the first four logs of the cabin about six feet longer than the rest. There is a small set of corrals in front of the cabin. There is an old shed to the north of the cabin, and the outhouse is behind it.
The porch has a hole in it where a horse stepped through it when someone forgot to put the chain across the doorway. In the rafters hang old horseshoes that we tack on when one of our horses loses a shoe. Half the porch is cluttered with tools, shovels jacks, chains, shoeing equipment and an axe. The other half is full of firewood.
The only electric thing in the cabin is the phone. Propane or wood runs everything else. There is only one propane light in the cabin. To light the rest we use Coleman lanterns. There isn't any running water in the cabin so we have to haul water.
The floor to the cabin is made out of scrap lumber. It used to be rough, but has been worn smooth with time. There are places where it has rotted out and has been patched. There are also places that have been burned by sparks from the two stoves, and people spilling the ashes. Inside the cabin, behind the door, is a long bench we stack pop, canned stew, and many other things on. In the corner is the dog food, which we keep inside so the squirrels and birds don't get it. However that doesn't stop the mice. At night you can hear them run across the floor and into the sack. We trapped mice for three weeks before we stopped hearing them at night.
A large hand made table is pushed against the left wall of the cabin. This is where we eat and play cards. I also sleep under the table at night because it is the only open space. At each end of the table is a homemade chair, and for the length of the table is an old bench.
Farther along the left wall is a four-post bed. It is the only bed in the cabin so we draw cards to see who gets it. Getting the bed isn't that big of a deal because the springs are bad and the mattress is covered with stains. I think the best part about getting the bed is that one of the three windows is above it.
On the back wall is a slab of wood that we use for a shelf. It holds a deformed deer antler, a coyote skull, and the shells for the guns. Below the shelf is the gun rack where the rifles set. On the top rung is my old Winchester 30,06, next is a Ruger .223. After that is a Mossberg 12-gauge shotgun. The last two rungs are taken by the .22 rifles. A company I have never heard of before made one. The other is a very old Savage. In the corner is a four point Mule deer head that the pistols hang off of. There are two Ruger .44's, and a Ruger .22 pistol.
Starting down the right wall, the first thing is the sink. The dirty dishes are piled in and around the sink. Under the sink is the bathtub. It is a big metal tub that we use to take baths and rinse the dishes.
Next along the wall is a small table that has a Forest Service map tacked to it. The map tells us where the ponds, gates, and fences are. Beside the map is the turnout paper. It tells us how many cows each person turned out. Then is the dead list, where we write down all the cows we find dead and who they belong too.
Farther down the wall is the refrigerator. It is full of left overs, sandwich meat, mayo, cheese, mustard, pickles, pop, and medicine for the cows. Next is the freezer. It's full of meat, bread, and a bucket of vanilla ice cream.
That is the cabin at cow camp where I spend part of my summer. Even though it may not sound that great, I think it is one of the best places I could spend my summer. It is really cool to be where my Great Grandpa had ridden, and said the best times of his life had been. I don't think I will ever get to go anywhere that has that effect on me again.
by sample essay
The cabin was built in the 1950's when my Great Grandpa rode up there, and it looks like not many repairs have been made since that time. The cabin is about 15 feet by 20 feet, and is made out of pine logs. There are places where you can see between the logs because the chinking is falling out. The cabin faces to the east. It has a small porch that was made by leaving the first four logs of the cabin about six feet longer than the rest. There is a small set of corrals in front of the cabin. There is an old shed to the north of the cabin, and the outhouse is behind it.
The porch has a hole in it where a horse stepped through it when someone forgot to put the chain across the doorway. In the rafters hang old horseshoes that we tack on when one of our horses loses a shoe. Half the porch is cluttered with tools, shovels jacks, chains, shoeing equipment and an axe. The other half is full of firewood.
The only electric thing in the cabin is the phone. Propane or wood runs everything else. There is only one propane light in the cabin. To light the rest we use Coleman lanterns. There isn't any running water in the cabin so we have to haul water.
The floor to the cabin is made out of scrap lumber. It used to be rough, but has been worn smooth with time. There are places where it has rotted out and has been patched. There are also places that have been burned by sparks from the two stoves, and people spilling the ashes. Inside the cabin, behind the door, is a long bench we stack pop, canned stew, and many other things on. In the corner is the dog food, which we keep inside so the squirrels and birds don't get it. However that doesn't stop the mice. At night you can hear them run across the floor and into the sack. We trapped mice for three weeks before we stopped hearing them at night.
A large hand made table is pushed against the left wall of the cabin. This is where we eat and play cards. I also sleep under the table at night because it is the only open space. At each end of the table is a homemade chair, and for the length of the table is an old bench.
Farther along the left wall is a four-post bed. It is the only bed in the cabin so we draw cards to see who gets it. Getting the bed isn't that big of a deal because the springs are bad and the mattress is covered with stains. I think the best part about getting the bed is that one of the three windows is above it.
On the back wall is a slab of wood that we use for a shelf. It holds a deformed deer antler, a coyote skull, and the shells for the guns. Below the shelf is the gun rack where the rifles set. On the top rung is my old Winchester 30,06, next is a Ruger .223. After that is a Mossberg 12-gauge shotgun. The last two rungs are taken by the .22 rifles. A company I have never heard of before made one. The other is a very old Savage. In the corner is a four point Mule deer head that the pistols hang off of. There are two Ruger .44's, and a Ruger .22 pistol.
Starting down the right wall, the first thing is the sink. The dirty dishes are piled in and around the sink. Under the sink is the bathtub. It is a big metal tub that we use to take baths and rinse the dishes.
Next along the wall is a small table that has a Forest Service map tacked to it. The map tells us where the ponds, gates, and fences are. Beside the map is the turnout paper. It tells us how many cows each person turned out. Then is the dead list, where we write down all the cows we find dead and who they belong too.
Farther down the wall is the refrigerator. It is full of left overs, sandwich meat, mayo, cheese, mustard, pickles, pop, and medicine for the cows. Next is the freezer. It's full of meat, bread, and a bucket of vanilla ice cream.
That is the cabin at cow camp where I spend part of my summer. Even though it may not sound that great, I think it is one of the best places I could spend my summer. It is really cool to be where my Great Grandpa had ridden, and said the best times of his life had been. I don't think I will ever get to go anywhere that has that effect on me again.
by sample essay
Thursday, May 20, 2010
ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY
BURGLARY
The burglary is done by the people who think themselves as helpless.This is sometimes become because of physicological problems.In the past, there were a lot of burglary events but nowadays it gets more and more because of the unemployment.When it is thought, the burglary is betrayal of the people’s to themselves and other people.
Firstly,those whom think the burglary as a solution betray them ; in the other word, they deceive themselves.Every one has physicological problems or can have no Money to get by.However, they shouldn’t steal something from anybody.This is a wrong behaviour.They can find a way to earn the Money.The ony help is not the burglary.If they do this, they lose their trust to themselves.They have iner conflict.
Also, the burglary is wrong and unacceptable behaviour, because it is aganist the community’s rule.Those whom maket he burglary are punished without being listened their excuses.In the same time, this people are excluded from the society.Nobody believes their reliable any more.If a person burgle once, he/she is always seen an unreliable person.
It is true that some people in the society look the burglary as an escaping and the easiest way to earn the Money.So they always try to do this wrong behaviour without thinking their outcomes.However, the burglary should never be solution to have the Money.Instead as I said above, these people can find a job and earn the Money in the moral way.In the end, they lose neither their own reliable nor the society’s reliable.
I believe that even though unemployment is increasing nowadays, as long as the society is gtting more and more well-informed this burglary will decrease day by day.Both people and the world will be happy and full of relianle.
The burglary is done by the people who think themselves as helpless.This is sometimes become because of physicological problems.In the past, there were a lot of burglary events but nowadays it gets more and more because of the unemployment.When it is thought, the burglary is betrayal of the people’s to themselves and other people.
Firstly,those whom think the burglary as a solution betray them ; in the other word, they deceive themselves.Every one has physicological problems or can have no Money to get by.However, they shouldn’t steal something from anybody.This is a wrong behaviour.They can find a way to earn the Money.The ony help is not the burglary.If they do this, they lose their trust to themselves.They have iner conflict.
Also, the burglary is wrong and unacceptable behaviour, because it is aganist the community’s rule.Those whom maket he burglary are punished without being listened their excuses.In the same time, this people are excluded from the society.Nobody believes their reliable any more.If a person burgle once, he/she is always seen an unreliable person.
It is true that some people in the society look the burglary as an escaping and the easiest way to earn the Money.So they always try to do this wrong behaviour without thinking their outcomes.However, the burglary should never be solution to have the Money.Instead as I said above, these people can find a job and earn the Money in the moral way.In the end, they lose neither their own reliable nor the society’s reliable.
I believe that even though unemployment is increasing nowadays, as long as the society is gtting more and more well-informed this burglary will decrease day by day.Both people and the world will be happy and full of relianle.
Sunday, May 16, 2010
CLASSIFICATION ESSAY
THE TYPES OF TEACHERS
Teachers are very important for us.After family, they give us lessons ,teach us.They take this responibility .In the same time we are the trust to them.There are a lot of teacher types such as democratical,authertical,funny, and boring.
Firstly , let me talk about democratical ones.Every student wants to be behaved equally.This type of teachers is exactltwhat they want.These teachers don't make a distinction among students.They treat every student in way they deserve.For example;some teachers some students make distinctions to the some of the students-they are maybe their relatives or acquaintance-.Even thse students are not succesful, they make them pass the course.
As another type of tecahers , autheritical ones may be given as an example.These teachers don't behave the students tolerantly.They don't always give them a right to show their opinions or thoughts.This causes that the tudents don't like these teacherS and come to the school unwillingly.These teachers want to be done what they want by heir students.If opposite becomes, they are angry with these behaviours and their students.
Another teacher type is funny ones.These teachers always make jokes to their students during the lessons like Recep teacher and in my opinion this type is the most liked one.Therefore, the students both aren't bored in the lessons and are succesful and come to the school willingly.
As the last one, the boring ones.They are opposite of the funny ones.The lessons of these teachers never pass according to the students .Teachers tell the subjects monotously.This makes the students bored.
As I mentioned above, there are a lot of type of the teachers and they are very important for both students and their succesfull.I hope that you won't bored during the course .I hope that your teachers are the funny and democratical ones.
Teachers are very important for us.After family, they give us lessons ,teach us.They take this responibility .In the same time we are the trust to them.There are a lot of teacher types such as democratical,authertical,funny, and boring.
Firstly , let me talk about democratical ones.Every student wants to be behaved equally.This type of teachers is exactltwhat they want.These teachers don't make a distinction among students.They treat every student in way they deserve.For example;some teachers some students make distinctions to the some of the students-they are maybe their relatives or acquaintance-.Even thse students are not succesful, they make them pass the course.
As another type of tecahers , autheritical ones may be given as an example.These teachers don't behave the students tolerantly.They don't always give them a right to show their opinions or thoughts.This causes that the tudents don't like these teacherS and come to the school unwillingly.These teachers want to be done what they want by heir students.If opposite becomes, they are angry with these behaviours and their students.
Another teacher type is funny ones.These teachers always make jokes to their students during the lessons like Recep teacher and in my opinion this type is the most liked one.Therefore, the students both aren't bored in the lessons and are succesful and come to the school willingly.
As the last one, the boring ones.They are opposite of the funny ones.The lessons of these teachers never pass according to the students .Teachers tell the subjects monotously.This makes the students bored.
As I mentioned above, there are a lot of type of the teachers and they are very important for both students and their succesfull.I hope that you won't bored during the course .I hope that your teachers are the funny and democratical ones.
Thursday, May 13, 2010
PROCESS ESSAY
THE WEDDİNG TİME
The marriage is an important , unforgettable time for the bride and bridegroom.That day ,in fact, is the most difficult time not knowing to pass.They both want everything should be done the most superb.
The prepations play an important role in the wedding time.The people get up at the early time for that and start to cook .Because in their homes , there are a lot of people who will stay and bu stuffed with the foods.The cooker men come to the marriage place and start to cook their meals.For the cooking, all necessities; the housewives wash the dishes.Because as there are most people , enough forks, knives, plates will not be found fot the meals.
The most important things are the prepartions of the bridegroom and bride.They get up earlier than the every mornings' with the happiness,stressful and a lot of hurry.They have a bath in early time and wear their special clothes.Then they both go to the hair dresser's to make up.The bride becomes very beautiful in that wedding dress with the making up.The bridegroom is , as well.Even doing these things is exciting fot both of them.
Finding the musicalist is the one of the most important things for the marriage.The families both serch the professional ones.Because there must not be problems at that day.Everyone wants it.Even most money0 is necessary to find professional ones, they are rented.
As I say, the marriage is the most important things for allpeople.As everyone wants the best, everything is done the best.Because the marriage is lives any once.
The marriage is an important , unforgettable time for the bride and bridegroom.That day ,in fact, is the most difficult time not knowing to pass.They both want everything should be done the most superb.
The prepations play an important role in the wedding time.The people get up at the early time for that and start to cook .Because in their homes , there are a lot of people who will stay and bu stuffed with the foods.The cooker men come to the marriage place and start to cook their meals.For the cooking, all necessities; the housewives wash the dishes.Because as there are most people , enough forks, knives, plates will not be found fot the meals.
The most important things are the prepartions of the bridegroom and bride.They get up earlier than the every mornings' with the happiness,stressful and a lot of hurry.They have a bath in early time and wear their special clothes.Then they both go to the hair dresser's to make up.The bride becomes very beautiful in that wedding dress with the making up.The bridegroom is , as well.Even doing these things is exciting fot both of them.
Finding the musicalist is the one of the most important things for the marriage.The families both serch the professional ones.Because there must not be problems at that day.Everyone wants it.Even most money0 is necessary to find professional ones, they are rented.
As I say, the marriage is the most important things for allpeople.As everyone wants the best, everything is done the best.Because the marriage is lives any once.
CAUSE AND EFFECT ESSAY
WHAT MAKES STUDENTS STRESSFUL??
Stress is a sense which people feel theirselves depressed or as if they will find any escaping way.Shortly, stress is unhappiness.Everyone thinks that they are depressed,maybe.Expecially the students feel it , a lot.A lot of things cause stress such as social life , financial problems, lessons.
First of all, the college students need to take financial support from their families.The university is a place needing a lot of money.Therefore,even the students try not to spend a lot of money, the money gets rid of easily.The students cope with the money of their books,dormitory,meals,daily necessities...etc , but the more money their families send, the more they spend.Therefore, as you see they will not have financial problems, a lot.If they receive financial support from their families , they motivate their lessons, a lot and be happy and dedicate all their times to their studies.If this is exactly opposite,they are certainly under stress.
Secondly, the lessonsis a factor causng the stress.University lessons is more difficult than the high school's.Students are tired from long studing to have good marks from their exams.This is bad effect on the students.They sacriface their most time to the lessons, exams, projes,and presentations..etc.This period can make the students bored after a while.Some students -in fact most students-can not become stronger aganist them.Therefore, they can be defeated to the stress.
Lastly, the university is a social life.There the students should control theirselves , make friends according to their caracteristic.Some students is not outgoing.These students have the difficulties in acquiring friends.They don't sometimes find their friends.They go to anywhere alone, eat alone, and don't hang out their friends.These students normally feel themselves so alone.In the end, they don't become succesful in their exams, motivate and are not happy.So they are full of stress.
If the students are stressful, they may neither give their intresting in their lessons, become succesful nor are happy in the university life.This is so imporant fotr the students.
Stress is a sense which people feel theirselves depressed or as if they will find any escaping way.Shortly, stress is unhappiness.Everyone thinks that they are depressed,maybe.Expecially the students feel it , a lot.A lot of things cause stress such as social life , financial problems, lessons.
First of all, the college students need to take financial support from their families.The university is a place needing a lot of money.Therefore,even the students try not to spend a lot of money, the money gets rid of easily.The students cope with the money of their books,dormitory,meals,daily necessities...etc , but the more money their families send, the more they spend.Therefore, as you see they will not have financial problems, a lot.If they receive financial support from their families , they motivate their lessons, a lot and be happy and dedicate all their times to their studies.If this is exactly opposite,they are certainly under stress.
Secondly, the lessonsis a factor causng the stress.University lessons is more difficult than the high school's.Students are tired from long studing to have good marks from their exams.This is bad effect on the students.They sacriface their most time to the lessons, exams, projes,and presentations..etc.This period can make the students bored after a while.Some students -in fact most students-can not become stronger aganist them.Therefore, they can be defeated to the stress.
Lastly, the university is a social life.There the students should control theirselves , make friends according to their caracteristic.Some students is not outgoing.These students have the difficulties in acquiring friends.They don't sometimes find their friends.They go to anywhere alone, eat alone, and don't hang out their friends.These students normally feel themselves so alone.In the end, they don't become succesful in their exams, motivate and are not happy.So they are full of stress.
If the students are stressful, they may neither give their intresting in their lessons, become succesful nor are happy in the university life.This is so imporant fotr the students.
OPINION ESSAY
LIVING ISTANBUL
Do you think that İstanbul is a place which should be lived.I think you are wrong.There are a lot of things which will be said about this subject.The people living in the small places or village went there to be able to find job,hopefully.Maybe,they had reason according to them ,but they did wrong thinking reason like these ones.
These going people try to struggle with a lot of problems.Firstly, they try to get by but can>t do it.Only father's working is not enough to get by at every family.The other members of the family will have to find a work,that's why.Nowadays because of this,these people is going their villages back.The problems aren't only this.Secondly,the bigger palce is the more handicaps,crimes,killing are.You can not go to a place alone at expecially nights if you are a girl.You can be harassed.The another problem is communication problems.Going to a place you want by walking is impossible.You have to get in buses certainly.At the traffic , you must be careful and patience not to be angry.As any reason, living the big place can cause the divorces of the parents.Even though there are too many problems some people want to live there.Unfortunately, they cann't think of it from the big scene.They may choose to live there as there is sea, beautiful places necessary to be seen in İstanbul.They are right.However , if they think of it ,they will see that the disadvantages will be more than the disadvantages.
As I said above the bigger the city is , the more the problems are. Do not forget this.If I had an opprtunity to be able to live there, I would not want to live it.Should you not want to live an problems at your daily life don't choose like me..
Do you think that İstanbul is a place which should be lived.I think you are wrong.There are a lot of things which will be said about this subject.The people living in the small places or village went there to be able to find job,hopefully.Maybe,they had reason according to them ,but they did wrong thinking reason like these ones.
These going people try to struggle with a lot of problems.Firstly, they try to get by but can>t do it.Only father's working is not enough to get by at every family.The other members of the family will have to find a work,that's why.Nowadays because of this,these people is going their villages back.The problems aren't only this.Secondly,the bigger palce is the more handicaps,crimes,killing are.You can not go to a place alone at expecially nights if you are a girl.You can be harassed.The another problem is communication problems.Going to a place you want by walking is impossible.You have to get in buses certainly.At the traffic , you must be careful and patience not to be angry.As any reason, living the big place can cause the divorces of the parents.Even though there are too many problems some people want to live there.Unfortunately, they cann't think of it from the big scene.They may choose to live there as there is sea, beautiful places necessary to be seen in İstanbul.They are right.However , if they think of it ,they will see that the disadvantages will be more than the disadvantages.
As I said above the bigger the city is , the more the problems are. Do not forget this.If I had an opprtunity to be able to live there, I would not want to live it.Should you not want to live an problems at your daily life don't choose like me..
Thursday, March 11, 2010
Cause and Effect Essay
REASONS OF CRIMES
Nowadays, we see so many crimes and criminals that it is impossible to get frightened and shocked.There are many people who commit suicides, man-slaughter, kill someone around us .But certainly they have problems causing the crimes
Firstly , one of what causing people to commit suicids or make harmful events is mental problems.While some people kill someone by accident , the others kill them deliberately.People , commiting suicides, kiiling ones don't know if the bahaviours they will make are right or not.If they are not stopped b y the professional ones or doctors,they can give the others harm.This can affect both them and the innocent ones.the other reason may be revenge.Some people want to take their revenges.So, they can kill the other people even the person kills one by accident without knowing if it is his/her real aim.He can kill him by not thinking its consequences as his heart has had an ache because of killing.Eveb he knows his behaviours are not right he can do that to onlt take his revenge.Has he right to do that because of this reason
The numbre of criminals and crimes is getting more and more because of the problems like these ones.In my opinion,these bad eggs must be taken under the control . Let both everyone and world be happy! Otherwise most people will take harm ..
Nowadays, we see so many crimes and criminals that it is impossible to get frightened and shocked.There are many people who commit suicides, man-slaughter, kill someone around us .But certainly they have problems causing the crimes
Firstly , one of what causing people to commit suicids or make harmful events is mental problems.While some people kill someone by accident , the others kill them deliberately.People , commiting suicides, kiiling ones don't know if the bahaviours they will make are right or not.If they are not stopped b y the professional ones or doctors,they can give the others harm.This can affect both them and the innocent ones.the other reason may be revenge.Some people want to take their revenges.So, they can kill the other people even the person kills one by accident without knowing if it is his/her real aim.He can kill him by not thinking its consequences as his heart has had an ache because of killing.Eveb he knows his behaviours are not right he can do that to onlt take his revenge.Has he right to do that because of this reason
The numbre of criminals and crimes is getting more and more because of the problems like these ones.In my opinion,these bad eggs must be taken under the control . Let both everyone and world be happy! Otherwise most people will take harm ..
Comparision and Contrast Essay
MY TWO ROOMS
Even though it isn't like my own bedroom, I have to admit that it is being my second room.Sometimes, I miss my bed.Sleeping seems difficult at first but in a short time I am accustomed to live there.When you compare them both , you will see their differncies , but they have things in common and I love both of them.
Both places have self-beayty and distinctive.For example; in the two rooms there are a two-floored bed.And I sleep the upfloor bed as I do at my own bedroom.Secondly, As the wardrop is necessary in a bedroom , I have the wardrop at my two rooms.In another thingin common, to be able to study the lesson there are a table in all rooms at KYK.Ans alsoboth of them have blotters.
Despite of their similiraties, these rooms are more differencies than tha similiraties.Sleep in my room is more refleshing and more comforting.Because that is only mine.And whenever I want to sleep , I can slleep in it quietly.Because there is no noise, no person ,That's why there is happiness.But in dormitory,As we are six people including me , Acann't sleep whenever I want.And that is very disturbing.The second differenty is that we cann't open the curtain all time in contrat I can open it in my own room.Because we are at the first floor in the dormitory.If we open them every person can see our room easily.The another one is that my wardrop in dormitory is so tight that I cann't put my clothes into it unwrinklabely.I hate this situation.But my on wardrop is not like that.I can put my all clothes into it easily.In other differency is my room is dirtier tham my dormitory.I have to clean my bed and tidy it.Because I don't live there only me.
In conclusion,these are two room I love.For me, both of them are home.When I want to go my home I miss the dormitory but when I come to the dormitory I miss my home :( So they both are indispensible for me any more...
Even though it isn't like my own bedroom, I have to admit that it is being my second room.Sometimes, I miss my bed.Sleeping seems difficult at first but in a short time I am accustomed to live there.When you compare them both , you will see their differncies , but they have things in common and I love both of them.
Both places have self-beayty and distinctive.For example; in the two rooms there are a two-floored bed.And I sleep the upfloor bed as I do at my own bedroom.Secondly, As the wardrop is necessary in a bedroom , I have the wardrop at my two rooms.In another thingin common, to be able to study the lesson there are a table in all rooms at KYK.Ans alsoboth of them have blotters.
Despite of their similiraties, these rooms are more differencies than tha similiraties.Sleep in my room is more refleshing and more comforting.Because that is only mine.And whenever I want to sleep , I can slleep in it quietly.Because there is no noise, no person ,That's why there is happiness.But in dormitory,As we are six people including me , Acann't sleep whenever I want.And that is very disturbing.The second differenty is that we cann't open the curtain all time in contrat I can open it in my own room.Because we are at the first floor in the dormitory.If we open them every person can see our room easily.The another one is that my wardrop in dormitory is so tight that I cann't put my clothes into it unwrinklabely.I hate this situation.But my on wardrop is not like that.I can put my all clothes into it easily.In other differency is my room is dirtier tham my dormitory.I have to clean my bed and tidy it.Because I don't live there only me.
In conclusion,these are two room I love.For me, both of them are home.When I want to go my home I miss the dormitory but when I come to the dormitory I miss my home :( So they both are indispensible for me any more...
Opinion Essay
DO YOU THINK THE MARRİAGE SOMEONE FROM OTHER COUNTRY IS RIGHT?
Whatever you agree or not, the marriage with person living in abroad has changed our lifes in negative ways.A lot of people were married to them, but the relationships were affected them badly.Because of this, marrying someone from other country causes the negative things.What are they?.
Firstly;the most important aspect is the differencies between them.Our life styles can not fix theirs.That's why ,there a lot of problems , disagreements.For example;We,Turks, kiss each other but this behaviour can be misunderstood by foreign people.It is wrong thing according to them.If you like that, when you kissed man older than you as respect, you are blamed for this.Because it is pity.The second one, both of you speak different languages.As long as you live together, you will have problems because of language differencies.Neither you nor she/he will learn the yours languages sufficiently.You can not say what you'll say as you want , so does he.Even all things , some people say that marrying someone from other country may improve our lifes , world and can be beneficial for us.However, if you thing from all side mentally, they will say 'NO, I can't live him'.But they can not see diaadvantages.Because of these thoughts , a lot of people marry but they are divorces in a short time.And so the divorcing is becoming more and more , nowadays.
As I have said in the body paragraph , marrying someone from other country affects us badly.May be,there are few people living hppily with her /his spouse.But this is an exception.Don't forget thinking this point from the large view.If you think mentally, you'll find the right way..
Whatever you agree or not, the marriage with person living in abroad has changed our lifes in negative ways.A lot of people were married to them, but the relationships were affected them badly.Because of this, marrying someone from other country causes the negative things.What are they?.
Firstly;the most important aspect is the differencies between them.Our life styles can not fix theirs.That's why ,there a lot of problems , disagreements.For example;We,Turks, kiss each other but this behaviour can be misunderstood by foreign people.It is wrong thing according to them.If you like that, when you kissed man older than you as respect, you are blamed for this.Because it is pity.The second one, both of you speak different languages.As long as you live together, you will have problems because of language differencies.Neither you nor she/he will learn the yours languages sufficiently.You can not say what you'll say as you want , so does he.Even all things , some people say that marrying someone from other country may improve our lifes , world and can be beneficial for us.However, if you thing from all side mentally, they will say 'NO, I can't live him'.But they can not see diaadvantages.Because of these thoughts , a lot of people marry but they are divorces in a short time.And so the divorcing is becoming more and more , nowadays.
As I have said in the body paragraph , marrying someone from other country affects us badly.May be,there are few people living hppily with her /his spouse.But this is an exception.Don't forget thinking this point from the large view.If you think mentally, you'll find the right way..
Descriptive Essay
THAT PLACE
Have you got a place you want to go every time whatever happens?I have a place to go ,when I am so bored,I discuss my family or my lover and want to be far from everything...etc.Even thinking of that place gives me refleshment and coolness.
It is so green a place and the sky is as blue as my lover's eyes: blue and green...One of them is my favourite colour , the another one is my lover's. Maybe , that's why,I love this place a lot.I should go there in the spring.Then it becomes so beautiful with the white daisies which are blossomning,and with the voice of the birds.The red roses and colourful blossomning flowers make the field as beautiful as the heaven, more alive, and more energetic. Furtermore,think of your two-floored home there.When I am bored in the city,I should go here to avoid from everything.When I get up,I should see the unity of the scene.I should smell the strong smell of this most wonderful place.And so,I am able to learn the real life in my balkoon.The sun should smile at me with its beautiful , yellow face as if gold.By sitting on the old wooden chair I should watch the moving from the side to side coyly of the so green trees
I want to go there which all colours ara mixed and live there , because if a person is happy a place wherever is , I think she must live there.Where am I happy? Don't you know?Of course, at the place at my dream !
Have you got a place you want to go every time whatever happens?I have a place to go ,when I am so bored,I discuss my family or my lover and want to be far from everything...etc.Even thinking of that place gives me refleshment and coolness.
It is so green a place and the sky is as blue as my lover's eyes: blue and green...One of them is my favourite colour , the another one is my lover's. Maybe , that's why,I love this place a lot.I should go there in the spring.Then it becomes so beautiful with the white daisies which are blossomning,and with the voice of the birds.The red roses and colourful blossomning flowers make the field as beautiful as the heaven, more alive, and more energetic. Furtermore,think of your two-floored home there.When I am bored in the city,I should go here to avoid from everything.When I get up,I should see the unity of the scene.I should smell the strong smell of this most wonderful place.And so,I am able to learn the real life in my balkoon.The sun should smile at me with its beautiful , yellow face as if gold.By sitting on the old wooden chair I should watch the moving from the side to side coyly of the so green trees
I want to go there which all colours ara mixed and live there , because if a person is happy a place wherever is , I think she must live there.Where am I happy? Don't you know?Of course, at the place at my dream !
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